Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is an issue of controversy over whether people should show their preference for animal protection rather than solutions to human issues. While it is necessary to address the problems of human beings, I subscribe to the opinion that governments and individuals should prioritize animal conservation.
It stands to reason that there is a need for tackling human issues. Firstly, people have to encounter manifold pressing problems such as poverty, poor hygiene and illiteracy. Those pose a challenge to daily humans, so it is logical for societies to give more attention. Secondly, people have to get exposed to more and more environmental hazards such as disasters, diseases or global warming. For example, the pandemic of Covid-19 poses a threat to an array of aspects of communities, so individuals should apply themselves to prevent the spread of the virus.
On the other hand, there are several reasons why we should save endangered animals. First, in the absence of animal protection, an abundance of species are on the verge of extinction. As a result, this gives rise to the interruption of natural cycles and has a devastating effect on food chains. Furthermore, preventing animals from being extinct plays an integral part in keeping biodiversity on Earth. If people destroyed it, the cost of managing the resulting changes to this planet and human beings would far outweigh the cost of animal conservation.
In conclusion, although tackling life problems is extremely important, it is my contention that governments and individuals should make an endeavor to avoid the extinction of animal species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28015564202 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9948402994 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603112840467 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6507511638 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300209671715 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949999524868 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053378027144 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177386435649 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522553128043 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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