Computers will become more intelligent than human being.some people find it is a positive development while others think it is negative
In this technological era,without computers all work will halt. Therefore,computers are now a crucial need of whole universe and by each passing day computers become sharp and more knowelegabel. So,a fair amount of society say,it is a favorable development while others are opposit to this phonomenon.In the upcoming paragraphs this essay sheds light on both perspectives.
To embark with,people take plethora of advantages from artifical intelligence..First of all,computers are able to do every work related to study or job and make it easy and fast for humans.For example,the calculations which are done by AI are more accurate and reliable, being a humam its impossible for everyone to tackle millions of equations in seconds. Therfore,technology is in the favore of human if the use it in a right way.
Although,computers have several benefits to world,some drawbacks are also originated by this.Firstly,unemployment is a major problem due to heavy usage of technology. For instance,in many organisations and companies all records are stored and maintained with the help of softwares instead of manualy by workers.As a result,work load on computers are increased and demand of new employees declined
To conclude, despite having advatages ,there are most concerning drawbacks of technology.No doubt it makes the life of human being easy by providing several facilities yet it accelerate the unemployment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60930232558 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.87318163341 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674418604651 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.891730489 49.4020404114 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.285714286 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7142857143 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.8571428571 7.06120827912 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172875230945 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740242427756 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321378932165 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891828940498 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524970151058 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.85 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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