In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy.
What are the causes?
What can be done to address this situation?
In today fast-paced life, young people are predisposed to a better life with the adequacy of material possessions and a longer life span. However, when they are asked to rate their happiness in a certain scale, the result is astonishingly low. The core of this problem can stem from the rat race in which everyone only aims for money as their life goal.
There are sufficient evidences to infer that the young generation are struggling with a more hectic and overwrought life. While the young have earned much more money compared to the predecessors, they still have to cope with more pressure to make ends meet as well as taking care of their parents. Consequently, even though they can get higher income, they don’t feel delighted at all since they are forced to sacrifice their youth to work non-stop. In another cases when young people have already fulfilled the material desire, it is a psychological effect that due to their lack of targets, they live aimlessly without joy and hope.
To tackle this problem, the goverments have taken some steps to help increase the happiness rate of the people. More and more recreational activities are organized and held together with the cooperation of psychologists and therapists to give young people a respite from their unhappy state. In addition, the encouragement and care from the family is extremely helpful in the young’s emotional life. After all, I suggest that parents should care more about the kids’ feelings by asking whether they feel exhausted or have something to confide in rather than anticipating them to achieve more goals or giving a better performance. Furthermore, the matter may lie in the young themselves. They should consider which things they actually want to do instead of following the other’s dream and firstly, write down the wishlists and plans so they can maintain their motivations and feel more orientated in the society full of chaos.
All in all, the young people should put their genuine happiness above the unrealistic temptations as they still have a long way to go.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, after all, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00290697674 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69955170998 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4736066514 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.928571429 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195705565003 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723854691785 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335959682623 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129421937643 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166925660604 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.