Q10 : Developments in technology causes environmental problems. Some people believe the solution in these problems is everyone accepts a simpler way of life, while others say that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Recently, the question of how to deal with environmental issues has become the subject of heated debate. Some people assert that technology allows human beings to handle environmental problems, while others argue otherwise. Personally, I wholeheartedly agree with the former stance. In the following essay, both views will be discussed before a conclusion is reached with my opinion.
On the one hand, those who claim that having a simpler way of life can alleviate the level of environmental concerns do so for several reasons. Proponents of this argument insist that with the advent of personal vehicles, a multitude of individuals drive cars, operated by fossil fuels, emitting a huge amount of CO2, leading to air pollution as well as climate change. This exerts a detrimental influence on the quality of people's life. In addition, numerous products made of non-disposable plastic are used by a myriad of everyday people, which poses a threat to the environment. Given these points, some people hold the view that changing our lifestyle into a simpler way, such as avoiding utilising plastic bags and commuting to and from work by public transport can ease these environmental problems.
My opinion, however, is that mankind should make use of technology in order to resolve contemporary issues related to the environment. Perhaps the most compelling reason is that a great number of large companies invest vast sums of money in developing the way to use renewable energy, including electricity. As an illustration, Tesla which is a notable firm in the field of the automobile industry could release cars using electricity as an energy source in the market with the help of technological progress. These cars can ameliorate the quality of air given that they do not generate carbon dioxide. Furthermore, the majority of developed countries across the globe have a predisposition to convert thermal power plants into other stations run by alternative energy, such as tidal power and solar power, owing to up-to-date technology. In light of the above, I find these more persuasive.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are a variety of opinions about this topic. However, after considering this matter in a careful manner, I fully support the view that the advancement of technology makes it possible for humans to combat environmental problems for the reasons discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25587467363 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99114851499 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626631853786 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2939167859 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.411764706 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5294117647 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251525400353 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641629984138 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562451949153 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132169906675 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186984878498 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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