The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
A glance at the bar chart provided reveals the statistics of British people donating money on purpose of charity by different age groups in 1990 and 2010.
Overall, people who were at the age of 36-50 took up the highest proportion of donating at the beginning while those from 51 to 65 years old dominated at the end of the period. The figure of the youngest (18-25), however, was the lowest in the two given years.
It can be seen from the chart that people aged between 36 and 50 provided the most money to charity in 1990, at the vicinity of 45% that stood in the first position. The figure had a moderate drop at 35% in the next given year, which was equal to the figure of people over 65 years old. The time of 2010 saw a slight upward trend of citizens aged 51-65 by approximately 10% to take up the highest proportion.
Regarding the folks from 18 to 25 years old, the figure commenced at over 17%, then witnessed an exponential decline at about 7% that still accounted for the smallest percentage through the years. There was a similar trend in the figure of citizens who stayed from 26 to 30 years old, which slightly fell by about 7% in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42790697674 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33131386507 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553488372093 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6119108834 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146437042825 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730127833511 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586810376716 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110305506429 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623384588536 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.