Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?
Food is an essential part of humans for living life. There is a huge requirement for food over the world and the main reason is the population. The international community can take several steps to fulfill the demand for food.
To commence with, the cause behind the high demand for in the world is raising the number of populations. The number of citizens increasing day by day and among this their need for accommodation increased. Because of this, they consume more land for fulfill that demand and use the farmland for housing, therefore the land for farming is reducing day by day so the production is also getting down. Another reason is that increasing the use of pesticides and other chemicals in the farmland for produce more grains. Due to this, land fertility is decreasing the production also decreased instead of increasing. Last but not least, the pollution which is made by industries in the land and air become an issue for farming.
There are some solutions which can be taken by international community to accomplish the need of food in the world. They should introduce some infrastructural models for housing and also make more and more skyscrapers to achieve the demand of accommodation. In addition, the community should establish some rules against the use of pesticides and chemicals in the cultivated land. Also they can make campaigns for new techniques for farming to improve the production without using pesticides. The industrial waste can be controlled or strict steps can be taken against industries for pollution by authorities.
In conclusion, although many reasons behind increasing the demand for food, the global community can solve this issue by taking some steps and fulfill the requirement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1338028169 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8755255335 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478873239437 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3676106968 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306721453214 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119936398316 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902189613845 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229096026749 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689634348951 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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