Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory, job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is some voice claiming that human beings ought to accept their situation no matter how bad they are. While as far as I am concerned, it is of paramount importance for individuals to cheer up and ameliorate such painfulness by enhancing their quality of life, as we will see.
On the one hand, there do exist some situation when accepting them is the better choice. For instance, if people could not alter such kind of dilemma with their own effort, they might probably be advised to accept it and try to enjoy it. However, in general, the demerits of accepting the relative stable position do outweigh its merits. Such kind of thought makes individuals get satisfied to themselves easily even though they are actually not elite enough, leading to weaker peer rivalry, which could prompt other changes such as less productivity or no creativity whatsoever.
On the other hand, nobody can deny that the believing of fighting for better life exerts positive impact on not only individuals, but also the whole society. With such belief, for instance, when confronted with failure, people would work/study harder than before, setting tougher objectives to accomplish. In that case, whether they make it or not, they become better person, feeling fulfilled during the process. What is more is that, individuals might pursue further education or gain advanced skills, such as learning to speak second language, due to this unsatisfied emotional feeling as well. Additionally, competitive spirit can be manifestly seen over those attempts, and healthy rivalry benefits industries and the society a lot.
To sum up, we can arrive at an undeniable conclusion that although accepting current situation may sometimes help, pursuing better life and trying to switch negative position benefits more overall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, for instance, in general, kind of, such as, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23793103448 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67671733577 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3034351986 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.583333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211615679876 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071251032082 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442157000661 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123650671813 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285100444525 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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