The bar chart below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010
The bar chart provides the information on the proportion of the alternative real assets process in Algeria, China and Argentina over the period of 3 years from the 2007s
From the graph, it is apparent that during this period, there were two general basic trend which were downward and upward for Algeria and China respectively. Besides, the graph was also witnessed by the varied changes in Argentina with the same period.
Algeria, the country with the exponential rise in property prices, picking at 6% of the total growth, making it become the fastest rate growth country in 2007. However, there was a drop of 1.5% in the next year before falling off to 3% and remained that level in two year later. Meanwhile, in the contrast view, it can be observed by China that was with the moderate development in that figure, beginning at 2% in 2007. Nevertheless, it was increased gradually to 4.2% in 2008 and rocketed to reached a pick of 6.0% after two years, 2010.
On the other hand, Argentina was erratic on its own figure during these mentioned period. Starting off just around 3.0% in 2007 but those figured after one year rose remarkably to 4.8% before dipping down to just around 1% and had a slight increase to 2.3 one year later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'trend' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'trends'.
Suggestion: trends
...is period, there were two general basic trend which were downward and upward for Alge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, nevertheless, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72350230415 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45765168744 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617511520737 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.448257398 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.125 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103323166623 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042776886472 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630810703268 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553350754301 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515426980041 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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