Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Whether having a healthy lifestyle is more feasible in the urban or in the rural areas remains a contentious topic. From my perspective, both areas can contribute significantly to maintaining a healthy lifestyle. This essay will take both sides into consideration and give my verdict.
On the one hand, residing in the cities brings about a wide variety of options to attain health benefits. To begin with, cities are often home to modern health-related services, thus citizens stand better chances of receiving high-quality treatment. For example, patients with fatal illnesses, such as cardiovascular disease, can be treated by advanced medical technologies in big hospitals in municipalities. Moreover, there are a host of places to improve physical health such as fitness centers and health clubs. By playing sports and practicing in health centers, urban dwellers would be able to stay away from a sedentary lifestyle. Therefore, I believe people in the cities certainly have advantages over rural fellas in terms of health-related services and medical treatment.
On the other hand, opting for country life can be advantageous for people’s well-being. Initially, inhabitants of rural regions have less tendency to suffer from mental problems such as stress and depression compared to city dwellers as they can get rid of the hustle and bustle of city life. Besides, the absence of pollutants and the presence of more trees can serve as a deterrent to adversely pollution-related diseases. This is derived from the fact that there are fewer industrial zones in rural areas compared to urban ones, thus lower levels of pollution. Therefore, people may have a better physical state to maintain a healthy lifestyle. So I think the countryside is an ideal place for keeping your physical and mental wellness.
In conclusion, as for the aforementioned explanations, I concur that people can achieve a healthy lifestyle in living conditions of both the urban and the rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36305732484 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10427067273 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576433121019 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3214924464 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228674323118 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696814663083 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517130880825 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135933897737 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167845417787 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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