Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The dynamics of the world have changed with the advent of groundbreaking technologies. Certain demographics hold the statement that there are numerous options and varieties available to consumers these days. I completely agree with the assertion as online shopping sites and malls are full of uncountable products.
First and foremost, there is huge competition in the global market among multinational companies to survive. Many companies are coming up with products that are equipped with the latest technologies and modifications. These inventions and innovations are more appealing to the customers and there is a race among manufacturers and produces to grab a large market share. As a result, People are finding enormous varieties around them. For example, Shopping malls like Dubai mall and Walmart superstores accommodate almost all companies’ products at the same place which provides overwhelming choices to customers.
On a further note, media advancement also played a paramount role for extensive exposure to such variety. People can easily access online shopping websites and mobile phone apps from their smartphones and laptops to find countless options for the products of their need as many companies offer the same products with a range of features and prices. Therefore, people can find a suitable product as per their requirements with a little search on the internet. Google, for instance, helps a lot in this process. We can find a number of results on the top bar of Google if we search for any product with their prices. Google filter the same item from different websites and show on the top of the search page.
The conclusion to be drawn is that people are experiencing a huge variety of choices due to rigorous competition among different companies to grab a large consumer market. Moreover, the media is also helping out these companies by providing extensive access to their products to the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28478964401 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91535290827 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543689320388 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6056465802 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13566205138 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456370456026 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372988938703 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815977012193 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274511046511 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.