Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
According to the constitution of most of the democracies around the world and various Human Resource organizations , Universal education is a basic fundamental right to be provided to all of its citizens free of cost by the government of the land. Hence I strongly believe that education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students.
I can provide a few reasons as to why I agree with the proposition. Firstly Education is a cash-intensive sector , requiring huge investments to set them up , upgrade as per the latest standards and keep them running . So, once if a private institution is set up and is in operation , it needs to absorb exorbitant amounts of funds from students , who may not be economically stable to pay it all up. So a huge section of students are left out of good education , at any level. This disparity can be solved if the government funds the education of students through grants, aids and other cash-transfer benefits. For example in the state of West Bengal, the authorities are giving out scholarships to BPL (below poverty line ) category children to fund their studies and also has brought many students under several beneficial schemes.
Secondly , by paying for the education of students Government are effectively socially uplifting a huge section of the society- the lower middle-class, and the impoverished ones. Their parents won't have to worry whether their kids would live like them. This makes a new tax-paying class who will fund the economy and boost nation's growth parameters like GDP. For example a poor man's boy who would be employed otherwise employed as child labor ,would be sent to a school , then college to be educated for free. The child would be an earning member to support the family and won't live in tatters like his father. He would graduate into a taxable member of the society who would fund others' education via taxes. This cycle will uplift a class.
Finally education if free would free the society of its's orthodox ideals. Take an example of a girl child who might be child-married , if goes to school will be an educated lady capable of choosing her partner
So I truly believe that education, from preschool through university, should be looked after by the State, not only because they are bound to so but also such a policy will make nation a superpower .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90818858561 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8215124627 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560794044665 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3452951073 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.352941176 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306612557028 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936339316455 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096301837941 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146967549226 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086123880007 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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