The youth in many countries are unemployed and unskilled, while at the same time, the military services are in need of people. Compulsory military service is beneficial and necessary.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is no doubt that the economic burden of a country is mainly attributed to crews of unemployed residents, especially in developing countries. Indeed, this particular group of society is the major concern of other social issues like crimes and the gap between rich and poor. To tackle these challenges, most people may look to military service in that unskilled individuals will be featured with practical skills serving their personal lives. Accordingly, mandatory military service could be considered as an essential solution when confronted with the contrasts amongst society.
As can be seen from the fact that so many unemployed people are in need of financial support to survive. Consequently, when the basic needs of humanity could not be satisfied, these crews would struggle to feed themselves at all cost, regardless of legal or illegal actions they could take. Furthermore, these precarious lives are more of an unsolved cycle of life in which children from these deprived families, at no time, have a chance to change their fates. As a consequence, poverty could be expanded as time goes by, which leads to the unbalance of society, extreme poverty and extreme wealth. As a matter of fact, if the problem remains long enough, it may result in the devastation of communities.
To militate against the negative effects that unemployment could bring, the military should have its mandate to deploy people from these communities. On the one hand, the national army would be reinforced by additional workforce, if compulsory military service is imposed across the countries. On the other hand, the military is in fact the most disciplined environment in which residents will be educated to be moral and skillful ones; then they could be the breadwinners of their families when returning to normal lives. In short, military service will not only bring a brighter future for those who struggle with their turbulent lives, but also strengthen the national defense.
Briefly, to mitigate the uncertainties amongst societies, military service should be imposed as a mandatory option for unemployed people, so that the problems about unemployment and workforce deprivation within the army could both be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, briefly, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, may, so, then, in fact, in short, no doubt, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29178470255 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8461162981 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57223796034 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.322809854 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.428571429 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210180214109 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076144257016 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501032850231 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134924000836 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420051387154 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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