Nowadays culture of different countries are becoming more similar then they used to be. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development give your own opinion and examples.
The whole world has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. In parallel to advancement in technology and hiking popularity of globalisation, it is apparently to seen that cultures of distinct nations are turning into single world culture. Here, I would like to account for reasons and mention this trend has numerous benefits than drawbacks.
There are manifold reasons behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, the role of education in transportation modes especially in air planes is terrific to emerge the similar culture among the different regions. To elucidate, enormous proportion of masses commute from one nation to another nation where they not only visit foreign countries but also try to imitate eating, wearing and living standard of foreign citizens. Moreover, internet is a pre dominant factor behind universe culture. To demonstrate, social media blessed the people with plenty of a social sites where people communicate with foreigners and collect immense knowledge related to their culture and customs. Hence,such factors contribute more to promote global culture.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to substantiate it's positive side. Initially, increment in global friendship is the result of alike a culture which lay down the foundation of peaceful and prosperous state. Besides this, having strong intimacy and affinity with overseas people upsurge the trend of import and export among several regions which allows thriving nations to foster their financial budget. It is clearly visible that single culture has a big pack of married for mankind and a nation.
To recapitulate, undeniably, the single word culture has some demerits. However, I still believe that benefits of this trend cannot be underestimated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52222222222 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82401274979 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651851851852 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.359134978 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116036718492 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357971725455 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251459561067 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624965888538 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211892897691 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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