The table and pie chart give information about population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.
The given table and pie chart covers data on the percentage of people who live in the Australian countryside and cities coming from various nations.
Firstly as can be seen from the pie chart, Australian citizens account for 73% of the population in this country, which is ranked the first position. Among these people, 20% live in cities and the rest of them live in rural areas.
Other nationalities take up less than 20% of the population in Australia. The proportion of British people is 7%, which is 4% higher than that of New Zealanders. In comparison with these features, the percentages of Chinese and Dutch citizens in Australia are much lower: 2% and 1%, respectively. Lastly, other nationalities account for 14% of the population in the same country.
A more detailed look at the table reveals that other nationalities have the same inclination in choosing living areas as the Australian. A considerable proportion of people in Australia choose to live in cities, with 89% of British, 90% of New Zealanders, 99% of Chinese, and 83% of Dutch. In contrast, those who live in the countryside take up a significantly smaller percentage, at lower than 20%.
To conclude, in Australia, the most common nationality in the population is Australia. Besides, people from different countries prefer living in cities rather than in the countryside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
... higher than that of New Zealanders. In comparison with these features, the percentages of...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...s have the same inclination in choosing living areas as the Australian. A considerable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09865470852 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01255859033 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547085201794 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3314393328 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214924644119 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843052016287 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747510222713 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125786396414 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419798780361 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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