Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing.
Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?
In today's world, many people develop an interest in extreme sports such as hang-gliding and mountain climbing. I believe that these activities are done because some people love to perform adventurous activities to excel the limits, and I am also convinced that these sports provide many advantages.
Today, many people take a part in extreme activities such as hang-gliding because by doing these sportspeople can measure their physical fitness. These types of sports require not only physical fitness but also physiological streght. Thus, when people can perform these sports they may consider themselves fit in both physical and physiological well-being. Another reason why people taking part in extreme sport is the improvement of extreme sports equipment quality. In the past, people were reluctant to participate in these activities because of the lack of safety provided by the equipment. However, thanks to the advancement in sports technology, in recent years, sports tools are designed as safely as possible. Therefore, extreme sports enthusiasts may not feel insecure to do hang-gliding or climb a mountain.
In my personal view, I believe that these activities are beneficial. First of all, many extreme sports enthusiasts undergo special training to perform these activities. This training involves consuming a balanced diet, strenuous physical training to develop body resilience which are directly beneficial to one’s health. Besides that, there is also another advantage. Climbing mountains have changed many people's views regarding the environment. Many mountain climbers are more aware of environmental issues after they reach a peak of a mountain. They have time to reflect on how beautiful this earth would be if people are aware of environmental issues. This reflection may change people's behavior regarding how they treat the environment.
To sum up, people participate in extreme activities because they want to know their limits and an increase of safety in equipment aspect. I think these activities bring benefits to its enthusiast because of the health benefits derived from this activity and the chance to change people's perspective about nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, i think, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56156156156 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88988763616 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537537537538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4966978226 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4736842105 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319720415294 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105061588436 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769883882578 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202296970607 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119329975561 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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