Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is a common belief that educating children to become a good citizens is parents' responsibility. However, there is a more persuasive argument that school plays a vital role in doing this.
On the one hand, to become a good member of any society, children must follow and respect the rules of the community. Parents are considered to be a kIt is a common belief that educating children to become a good citizens is parents' responsibility. However, there is a more persuasive argument that school plays a vital role in doing this.
On the one hand, to become a good member of any society, children must follow and respect the rules of the community. Parents are considered to be a key factor in assisting children what is important in their life. They share difficulties and problems with their children when troubles appear. Parents navigate their children to a brighter aspect or outlook of life. Children who lack care from their parents endure a hard time alone having no one to share. They can easily get stressed and depressed.
Nevertheless, school education is an ideal place for children to develop and become good society's members. A school is a place where children can encounter many problems with their peers. They will learn how to handle troubles themselves. Teachers also have an influence on children's behavior as their parents. They teach their students how to conduct properly and respect others. They also can orientate children's dreams and nurture their talents, and help them to pursue them.
In short, It is a lifelong learning process for individuals to develop their personalities and competencies to become respectable citizens. In addition, every member of society must have a sense of responsibility to help the younger generation to be able members of that society. ey factor in assisting children in what is important in their life. They share difficulties and problems with their children when troubles appear. Parents navigate their children to a brighter aspect or outlook of life. Children who lack care from their parents endure a hard time alone having no one to share. They can easily get stressed and depressed.
Nevertheless, school education is an ideal place for children to develop and become good society's members. A school is a place where children can encounter many problems with their peers. They will learn how to handle troubles themselves. Teachers also have an influence on children's behavior as their parents. They teach their students how to conduct properly and respect others. They also can orientate children's dreams and nurture their talents, and help them to pursue them.
In short, It is a lifelong learning process for individuals to develop their personalities and competencies to become respectable citizens. In addition, every member of society must have a sense of responsibility to help the younger generation to be able members of that society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
...hat educating children to become a good citizens is parents responsibility. However, the...
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Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
...hat educating children to become a good citizens is parents responsibility. However, the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... stressed and depressed. Nevertheless, school education is an ideal place for c...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ey
...ion to be able members of that society. ey factor in assisting children in what is...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... stressed and depressed. Nevertheless, school education is an ideal place for c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2440.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 477.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11530398323 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81323753515 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.291404612159 0.561755894193 52% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.9 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 16.0721442886 199% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5704884965 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.25 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.90625 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269352778632 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890473151484 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381220301832 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169352951182 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336138231319 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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