Some people like to try new things, for example,places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with.
Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Every individual have different hobbies, which gives them excitement and refreshment from boring routine life. Nowadays all are working professionals, in which majorly people are doing office jobs, sitting in front of workstations long continuous hours. Therefore to take a break, every person have variety of interest and passions which they would like to pursue.
As all human beings are different, everyone's choice of activities and hobbies are also vary. Lot of people find excitement in discovering things,for instance a lake hidden in the valley some where on a long drive. For some people doing new things all the time gives adrenaline rush. These kind don't only restrict in new places, they love trying new cuisines as well. Personally I am this kind of person, I like new people to meet, something exotic food, drinks, some place I have never been too.These people like exploring untouched and wild places. Change is the only constant thing for them. This shows the tendency of a person to adapt and mold in environment easily. They are more confident when facing adverse situations in there lives, as result of exposure and being of adventurous nature.
However, all human beings are not same, so we have people who cannot accept change easily. This kind likes there comfort zone and hence keep pursuing hobbies and activities in which they are more familiar. I feel the main reason behind this, is they cannot risk trying new things, whether that is food or a place. These kind of people like to keep all affairs simple and low key. They don't want to tackle excitement and adventure. I am not saying, these are not passionate people, but they are not open to the idea of something new,fresh. Everything should be same,as the way it has been for them, constant, unchanged. Personally I feel these kind of persons are quite reserved and calm. They like inner peace more than adrenaline rush.
To summarize, everyone have there own choices. Few likes to be in there familiar zone of food,places, activities, whereas for some only something new and fresh is acceptable and exciting. As I am a person who always tries something different, I like this outgoing and always discovering something attitude.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, as for, for instance, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57612230608 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543243243243 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5013081585 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4347826087 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0869565217 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26086956522 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27663321676 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804567805892 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709702576086 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16595289695 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740363919761 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.