Some people say that art (e.g. painting, music, poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can be only made by those with special abilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Human beings have been accompanied by art since the dawn of civilization. While some individuals claim that everybody can create their own artistic products, the rest strongly oppose it by saying that only people with particular talent can do it. When it comes to me, I definitely advocate the latter school of thought by discussing both views of the issue.
To commence with, with limitless abilities and high determination, humans can easily create many things, especially art. According to human history, there is easy to observe the emergence of many prominent scholars who could conquer an array of subjects from astronomy to art. As a result, if people spend the majority of their time researching and practicing, they are more likely to become a painter, a music composer, or even a literator. No matter how complicated the subjects are, people can become skilled workers in many fields through education and implementation. For example, my uncle who has been spending decades in painting gained his first success by opening an exhibition last month.
Despite those aforementioned proportions, there are few people who could reach the ultimate stage of art. Indeed, the number of human artifacts is extremely small when compared with the world population. Creating an artistic feat need lots of time and endeavor, and therefore it is definitely not for everyone. Moreover, to become successful artists, individuals have to be a person with highly sensitive emotions of art, which is only determined by nature. Talent, experience, and feeling are some crucial factors for an artist to create a feat. For instance, according to Vietnamese famous news, Tuoitrenews, the average number of products of famous artists throughout their lives is under five.
All in all, if all factors are contemplated, people can easily reach the conclusion that the world of art, including painting, literature, music, etc, is not for everyone. Only those artists with gifted nature and relentless practicing can create great feats.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28260869565 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85444275602 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614906832298 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.770255016 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238841592396 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726149878098 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546909290832 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154183162703 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549520748103 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.