Thorough the history, people dream to live in a perfect society while they haven’t agreed how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? How do people do to achieving an ideal society?
In terms of the ideal society, there are many controversial factors contributing to this topic as everyone holds a different view on how is called a perfect society. In my opinion, an ideal society is a society where people who live in it behave with great tolerance and pure altruism. This requires efforts made both by the authorities and residents themselves to jointly achieve such idealism.
In fact, it seems to be unattainable to achieve a society that is considered perfect since this definition is too subjective and illusory, a society always has its own flaws during its entire lifespan. However, a society will become worth- living and more beautiful when people can forgive each other’s mistakes, put aside hatred or selfishness, accept each other’s drawbacks, and truly open their tolerance. Because no one is perfect, and people always make mistakes at least once time during their lifetime. Besides, if individuals truly care about the surrounding environment, the future generation, or those who are in need, it might reduce the environmental degradation process or climate change, lower the poverty, famine, and crime rate.
In addition, this goal is utterly far-reaching if there will be no coordination between the government and dwellers to form the aforementioned tolerance and benevolence environment, in which the authority plays a vital role in promoting moral standards by investing in education and enacting humanitarian laws. With serious focus on building the early education system for children embracing interpersonal skills and altruism, we can make a paradigm change in today’s society. Furthermore, parents and relatives critically help nurture tolerance and benevolence in their children at an early age by setting shining examples for them to follow as well as educating them about giving their hands for those who are in need. This may greatly affect the trajectory of a child’s personality development which can later be reinforced by education at school, and this child will likely become a warm-hearted and sympathetic individual when reaching adulthood.
In conclusion, a perfect society that may be supposed unrealistic can still be seen as an ambition to pursue by encouraging inner tolerance and altruism in every individual with the collaboration of both the government and every citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, well, at least, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42896174863 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05287127023 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595628415301 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7665729566 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.583333333 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223828631029 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820210935338 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084016516121 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14843054596 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081772244147 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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