In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages.
The trend of more and more people moving to the large apartment blocks in large cities is being increasingly widespread these days. Although, this trend have more advantages rather than disadvantages. I will discuss both these position before reaching reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, there are many benefits for living in apartments. Firstly, this apartment do not consumed more land area, which can help to save farm area. For instance, due to maintain farm area and residential area government generally allocated limited area for built new resident. Secondly, this types of houses was needed less money compare to house. This can be seen that due to this reason more and more people, who moved from rural areas, are mandatory to live in apartment for less burden of their financially.
However, on the flip side of coin, many people also want to live in house because, this consume more ground land. It can be clarified that older people can easily moving in garden area and not to depend on others. For example, people are mostly depend to others for moving up-down, whilst houses resident are easily moving to nearest garden and park. Apart from this, garden can be developed in this types of resident, which is more useful to plant different types of flowers and fruits. After this will use in their daily routing as food and save from chemical product.
In recapitulation, although there are two contrasting view regarding residential, as far as I am concerned that apartment for cheap rate and save land area, but house is more beneficial for pant different fruits and flowers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing increasingly widespread these days. Although, this trend have more advantages rather...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the nearest'.
Suggestion: to the nearest
...hilst houses resident are easily moving to nearest garden and park. Apart from this, garde...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...t from this, garden can be developed in this types of resident, which is more useful...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53091016174 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1222751283 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264289393194 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986734461947 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831209976398 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163603765327 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852238072539 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.