Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
To commence with, purchasing goods in e-commerce is because of easy access to receive those without going out to physic shop. Nevertheless, this has a detrimental impact due to the fact that buyers will be cheated by the merchants in a number of internet-shopping applications, the stuffs bought are not original. For example, Indonesians purchase IELTS books on Tokopedia, ordering those effortlessly with one-clicking only, the sellers guarantee those are not imitation possessing high printed quality. When these such literatures have delivered, then those are checked, the writing is blurred, and this means that it is categorized as such a scam.
Moreover, surfing in online store to buy several stuffs has a tendency to be cheaper in order to claim discount vouchers. Nonetheless, people registering an account in e-commerce witness data hacking, that is why it provides more severe effects. For instance, Traveloka offers discount to the users monthly, claiming voucher to reserve cost less flight to travel abroad. In 2020, this huge internet-based travel agent was hacked because of the security system unmaintained, and the millions of accounts were crawled, and some users’ data had been identified to be sold by the hackers in deep-web.
In conclusion, the Internet-based purchasing reveals more drawbacks than the merits, witnessing the data crawling and merchants’ fraud. If consumers desire to avoid the adverse influences, they shall have a high awareness prior to buying the things virtually, and do real-time check their own account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47302904564 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07283753856 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688796680498 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6329323044 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.9 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157715349621 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535874793517 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311165356708 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098636418988 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259706298045 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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