Some people believe that using bicycle as your main form of transport has a lot of advantages,whereas others think that it has many disadvantages discuss both views and give your opinion
According to many people using bicycle as a ride has more benefits, however some people argue that it has some drawbacks.Based on some Rational grounds, it has both pros and cons.
Firstly, using bicycle has a lot of benefits like health benefits and also monetary advantages.Bicycle has many health benefits and there are a lot of people who has cars but they use bicycle for exercise,it burns your calories and keep you from obesity And many doctors recommend to heart patient to use bicycle in order to control health issue. In addition bicycle has also monetary benefits and without fuel you can use it and as well as you do not need any mobile oil change.
Moreover,two wheeler has also low maintenance cost as compare to four wheeler vehicle.
On the other hand, it has also some drawbacks like problem in rainy weather because it has no roof and in the winter you will face cold because it has no heater facility and vice versa in summer it has no air condition. so,You may feel hot. Moreover,it takes more time as compare to other vehicle. for instance,it has no engine it is run by human force. So, maybe it will get tired and drain your energy and it will affect your work in office.
To conclude,it has many health benefits and Plethora of people use it for exercise.
However,it has some seasonal weather issues and it takes more time to travel as compare to engine vehicle.I believe it benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72619047619 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56991859938 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.5237046276 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.272727273 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228585745538 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747855983875 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748807456866 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107933731112 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744988656903 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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