Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
In this technological era, globalization on business and cultural era are two important aspects of living a good life. Some people think it is quite beneficial whereas others think it is a threat to our national uniqueness. In my opinion, I believe that knowing more about business and cultural aspects of different nations led to positive growth of nation than any negative effects.
On one hand, I agree that diversity is an important factor in becoming a successful venture. Understanding your customers need is the basic principle which can lead to profits for an organization. For instance, a very famous japanese brand named 'miniso' had acquired indian market in just no time because it had very well understood the indian consumers regarding useful items majorly stationary. Their products are quite adorable and one cannot stop themselves from buying it. Knowing the new trends in the market even the indian companies associated with stationary or such products will try to improve and reach new standards in business.
On the other hand, people who wants to always take safer decisions in their ventures thinks that taking risk on a global scale will affect nations identity. These people are in their comfort zones and stepping out of it involves lot of courage. These people are happy with the amount of income they are getting from their ongoing ventures. For instance, local small business named 'quilshots' which is known for its decorative collection made by paper is available in one state and has a fear to expand.
In my opinion, Globalization will empower nations economy and will also bring good business to the country. It will always led to a positive growth for any venture as we can all see the midsize enterprises namely 'labelmannatgupta', a fashion industry of clothings which started from indian market and is reaching to many nations slowly.
To sum up, taking risk in business is the basic principle for a positive curve and it helps us learn more about other cultures and nations requirement. Whereas a threat to uniqueness might be possible drawback but right direction and thinking might work in favour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: lead
...business to the country. It will always led to a positive growth for any venture as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07932011331 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72939964441 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580736543909 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5338246945 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230503408363 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071623110103 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803231603874 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136771668026 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944334369706 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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