Some people believe that bicycles are the best mode of transport in the cities, while others disagree.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that the bike is one of the most popular transportation in the world for many reasons. Although some people think that this travel method is the most suitable for the urban, I would argue that it is not the most insightful choice for the citizens.
On one hand, those who support the former view might argue that one of the most significant problems of cities is probably pollution which can be decreased by using bicycles. This is because bikes use human strength which doesn’t cause waste gas like the others. For example, Japan is the country with the least amount of pollution in the air thanks to a large number of bike users. If everybody uses bikes rather than other transport, the air will be much fresher.
On the other hand, the reason why I said that using bikes wasn’t the most brilliant choice is that they consume a lot of time. The reason is that they use human strength which is limited, so it leads to a lower speed compared to the other methods. For instance, a teenager can ride a bike at twenty or thirty meters an hour while a car driver can finish the fifty meters distance in an hour. To make it clear, if people can only use bikes to travel, they might have to stay on the road for about nearly ten hours a day, which means nearly half a day just for moving.
In conclusion, despite the fact that bicycles are eco-friendly, I still believe that there might be a better way to protect the environment rather than spend most of the time on bikes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...mount of pollution in the air thanks to a large number of bike users. If everybody uses bikes rat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28876089758 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.7668231717 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0843057193144 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336275630762 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0215269945503 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525549917362 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00551094957294 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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