In the past shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend.
In the recent days, there is an emerged trend among the modern people that turns the shopping from a routine domestic task to a hobby. I personally think that it is a positive trend only until a certain point.
I acknowledge that go out for shopping can bring some positive outcomes. For instance, this kind of activities becomes a good alternative way for people to escape for a while from their daily hecticness. There are some research conducted among the corporate workers that state that the feeling of joy from shopping experience is capable to boost the positive energy which eventually leads to the more productive employees. Other than that, the increasing of buying as a hobby also stimulates the vast growth of some industries. For example, the high demand of various textile products makes this industry to be more alive and provides some new workplace for the public.
However, to some extent, just like the other habits that reach the uncontrolled level, there are some drawbacks from shopping trend as a hobby. The first thing, the more addictive people with this hobby, the more consumptive they are. Consequently, it will lead to unbalanced expenditures which certainly triggers to the bigger impacts such as, shortage of monthly income. At this point, the feeling of joy from shopping turns to a new source of stress. Furthermore, buying some unnecessary things out of basic needs usually leave a huge amount of unused products. At the end, these products will become a big problem to the environment. For example, there are tonnes of clothes waste every year as a result of the shopping trend.
Overall, I agree that there are some merits that follow the increasing of shopping trend. However, I fully aware that at the certain level, there are some negative impacts await as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, so, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97359735974 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5964432819 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547854785479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9710613183 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181865264769 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062687975947 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564284734457 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128968032812 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812945840772 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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