Youngsters get famous in early age. Is it right thing or bad thing?
Nowadays, people are craving to attain name and fame in life. It is often thought by a few masses that young ones become famous in early age. While i strongly believe that being popular in the younger age is a positive development, I also advocate the view that they are immaturity might hinders their success because of some potential reasons.
On the one hand, Attaining prosperity in early age has many benefits for youth. Firstly, gaining success in tender age enables youngsters to fulfil their dreams as today most of the people work hard in an effort to achieve their aims and objectives early in life. Hence, it does not only satisfies them emotionally but also they can boost their financial position by earning money. For example, various competitions are organized to give young generation a chance to prove their talent by many TV channels such as singling and dancing. It provides them a platform to give their performance and gain popularity worldwide. Secondly, becoming successful in early years of life allows children to support their parents as many youngsters come from unprivileged families and by earning money through their vast talent they can improve their living standard. Therefore, if youth will be appreciated to participate in distinctive shows sponsored by TV channels, they can get far more benefits from this trend. Finally, society become a beautiful place to live when young generation would represent it by spreading inspiration for other people instead of joining bad company. So, when anyone become successful it results in motivation and guidance for other ones living in society. That is why, getting success and famous as a youngster lead to great advantages for individuals and community as a whole.
On the other hand, some times for getting fame young ones choose illegal ways. First of all, They indulge in bad companies by coming under the influence of bad people. As they are immature in early age and if someone gives greed of money in exchange of doing anything for them. Consequently, they may spoil their future by executing practices that are unacceptable in society.
To conclude, Although it is favourable for young ones to achieve their targets in early age, it might be a difficulty when they have control of media and immaturity can also affect their success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05729166667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65936806371 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559895833333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0328687945 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.888888889 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14955512308 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546096184388 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052461943889 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101147947209 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226748345979 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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