Some people think that some types of criminals should not go to prison. Instead they should do unpaid work in the community. To what extent do you agree?
Some people reckoned that the way to punish some criminals may go better if they do unpaid work for the society rather than putting them into the jail others believes in the traditional way of punishment. The way of punishment should be different from criminal to another so some criminals should have a better method of punishment for them and for the society. This essay will argue what is the best method for some criminals to be punished by jail or do unpaid works.Some dangerous criminals must be imprisoned in order to preserve society and for enforce the law respect the right of others and be a lesson to the other criminals afterwards ,Furthermore without rules in the society and without punishment anybody will do whatever he want , Beside that there will be no system can control the country .In the past all societies used to put laws for every crime and the suitable punishment for it that was for long time ago and before the appearance of idea of the modern country ,However this is a necessity for any sort of community or a country to dominate the people . On the other hand some people believe that some criminals need a modern type of punishment would be better for some criminals like enforce them to make unpaid work for the society that would turn them to be productive persons and be useful for their society. Beside that it would make them feel their value instead of throwing them into the jail and this is a beneficial method to gain them more experience which would get them a benefit after finishing their punishment period and that is why this method would be better for fix them . To sum up punishing the criminals is a must for every society by the classic ways of punishing , Although some criminals who less dangerous than murders should be punished by another way that would be useful .I reckoned that it would gain them hope for their future and there would be another chance for them in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lesson to the other criminals afterwards ,Furthermore without rules in the societ...
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...riminals afterwards ,Furthermore without rules in the society and without punishm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, as for, i reckon, sort of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31884057971 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.92694120175 2.80592935109 283% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440579710145 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 362.8016538 49.4020404114 734% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 367.0 106.682146367 344% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.0 20.7667163134 332% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.0 7.06120827912 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200505649946 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141338746851 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888314298862 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200505649946 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.1 13.0946893788 291% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.9 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.76 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.