Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine.
Why do you think this happens?
How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?
Adopting a regular fitness regime is advisable to the elderly by the majority of medical practitioners. Nonetheless, a minority of patients are recorded to follow the doctrine. I contend that there are several underlying factors involved in this procrastination and some measures could be suggested to alleviate the situation.
Potentially, this phenomenon could be justified by a variety of explanations, chief of which is the physical limits for participating in activities that are included in the treatment regimen. In terms of the senior residents, activities such as socializing for the fundamental demand to avoid loneliness, taking care of the offspring while their parents are at work or cultivating bonsai tend to occupy most of their retirement ages. Yet, most of them are incapable of integrating different tasks to accomplish at the same time simply out of their physique capabilities, and in turn, they will weigh more on personal preferences. Hence, the idea to adjust their daily routines for physical exercises is not always feasible as the elderly nervous system functions based on a limited capacity of memorizing, they may not be conscious about changes but the familiar schedule.
On the other hand, the most viable solution to raise public health awareness is to execute the provision of public sports facilities. For one, not only the accessibility for senior citizens is increased but also youngsters are the beneficiaries given the opportunities for training and participating under a spiritual environment. The gap between generations is eliminated and people immerse in the joy and pleasure of practicing team sports such as badminton and shuttlecock. Such projects should be implemented widely owing to the fact that certain rural areas do not have access to those amenities. By doing so, social equality could be promoted and general public health could be tremendously ameliorated.
To conclude, there are excuses for the procrastinated fitness programme of senior residents. Steps should be taken immediately to ensure individuals’ physical well-being in accordance with equal accessibility to sports facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 654, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
..., social equality could be promoted and general public health could be tremendously ameliorate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, nonetheless, so, well, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55623100304 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23083004281 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607902735562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4954426357 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.571428571 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138390458137 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422371557893 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279019802977 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730518403205 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248946653805 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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