Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them.
This is a fact that wild animals plays an significant role in maintaining eco-system. Many suggest that all the creatures living in wilds should be protected, others view that a few animals should be saved. According to my perception all of the creatures are an important part of ecological chain and must be escaped.
On the one hand, there are several potential reasons why people think that it is not required to preserve all wild species. Firstly, Due to increasing population people need more space for residential purposes as houses are constructed for the purpose of survival of human being. If more are more wild animals would be there, it requires large part of land for their habitats. Therefore, saving more carnivores and herbivores would leads to lack of space. Secondly, wild life can have harmful impacts on individuals as rising population of wild species might bring dangerous impacts by leading injuries to local people. Consequently, it is suggested that not all animals should be preserved.
On the other hand, in my opinion all creatures which are living in jungles have crucial role to play in saving planet. First of all, the entire food chain is regulated by not only humans but by all the animals and birds on the earth. For example, carnivores depends upon plants and grass as a their food source and herbivores rely on other animals to full up their stomach. That is why, killing some of the animals would have adverse affects on the life on the globe. Most importantly, wild animals circulate insect and pest control that is extremely important.
To conclude, although some people think that in order to avoid risk of attacking by wild huge animals that do not need to protest, i firmly believe that escaping them can leads to smooth running of ecological food chain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91803278689 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59034238854 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544262295082 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4903839523 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244030763632 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807670836243 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642155513463 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149107120852 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261141570002 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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