Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people’s opinions differ on how to approach news in society nowadays. While it is argued that some media platforms could be the optimal method to gather information, I firmly believe that newspapers are more beneficial for readers.
On the one hand, there are many good reasons why the media are advocated to get information, one of which is their own high speed. There is no denying that people no longer find different traditional platforms such as papers that can convey and update news as fast as media ones. Another key reason is that users could directly express their emotions about news by sharing, commenting, and using emojis. For example, Facebook, a social networking platform, makes it easy to update and search all kinds of news and their users’ feelings about specific news in the community.
On the other hand, newspapers associated with getting news could benefit viewers rather than the media, due to their own safety and formality. Without any doubt, the amount of news in newspapers is thoroughly edited before being released, helping readers avoid junk information, spams. In fact, people are overwhelmed by news daily, choosing a reputable news source like newspapers will save their time to do other things instead of surfing on the Internet. In addition, it should be noted that images and words in newspapers are safe and suitable for all ages, eliminating exposure to blood, violent images and scary stories. If people frequently use the media to get information, they can suffer from terrible experiences which are not filtered for creepy stuff before being posted.
In conclusion, I completely agree that people should read newspapers, both traditional and e-newspapers, to seek information instead of using the media. In terms of safety, the newspapers are obviously better than the media with convenience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with getting news could benefit viewers rather than the media, due to their own ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20805369128 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69738548849 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.87414027 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.384615385 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249375846038 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08781321311 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310279061973 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143946742264 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397212400745 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.