many believe that fast food industry are causing bad effects on people health, changing their eating habits and negative effect on environment. Do you agree or disagree with statement.
Many people think that fast food business had a very bad impact on people well being and also causing issues to daily life environment as well. I am also agree to the view because, junk foods effects weight problems and serious health causes.
First of all, every person is getting over weight because of fast food, every one prefer fast food items to save precious time, also after well known fact that eating burger, chips etc is causing problem of getting fat, people are still in love to eat. For example in almost every country people who are related to jobs such as teacher, office workers etc mostly eating junks in work place because of short breaks they are unable to cock healthy meals, although some employees take their diet lunch from home to remain fit. Thus Eating regular fast food can save time but can creat health issues.
Secondly , it is most often says that time saving meals contain low amount of protein which cause many health diseases furthermore medical laboratories released an report that people how eats unhealthy meals in daily routine are mostly facing hair fall and joints pain and swelling in joints .For instance Australian government was running a campiness 3 months ago that people must avoid eating junks in daily routine, because docter’s were receiving thousands of cases related to fast food patients. Junk food can be more harmful in daily life.
To sum many people prefers junks to save time but it effects on weight and health is unacceptable. I believe that avoiding junk food and eating healthy food will help us live more and happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85294117647 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13388749193 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636029411765 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.642047839 49.4020404114 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.666666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7777777778 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278110615807 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125757376904 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511861027434 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188248825672 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553150999001 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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