Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age.
Discuss both views and present your own opinion.
It is true that the question of whether to go to school early or after 7 years of age remains a source of controversy. While a number of people believe that early education is more beneficial, I would argue that 7 years old is a better age to commence schooling.
The support for early education is justified by two main reasons. Chief among these is that it allows parents to return to work earlier, which helps to ensure their earnings. This is why most primary schools, where pupils are taken care of by professional staff, have timetables compatible with common working hours. A further rationale is that younger children are more malleable, making them more willing to follow instructions. Take, for example, grade 1 classes in Vietnam, which focus on teaching young learners basic classroom rules and codes of conduct. In comparison to younger ages, those above 7, with a higher sense of self, tend to take more time to adjust to these set protocols.
There are two main reasons to support education after 7 years old. The chief explanation is that children at this age have better physical conditions. For instance, they tend not to fall ill easily when the weather suddenly gets humid or hot. In comparison, younger children are not as strong and may be sick unpredictably and parents might have to take sudden absence leaves to take care of their offspring, which can undermine their work performance. A further rationale is that 7-years-olds have better cognitive abilities, allowing them to absorb condensed knowledge from both logic-heavy disciplines such as Mathematics and practice-oriented ones such as Science and Art. Comparatively, younger children are more suitable to a fun, less intensive approach, which means they can be overwhelmed with the academic content in schools.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is more advantageous to go to school after 7 years old.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
It is true that the question of whether to go to school early or after 7 years ...
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Line 5, column 762, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...table to a fun, less intensive approach, which means they can be overwhelmed with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05590062112 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86765551792 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580745341615 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0512832453 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.533333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164752315652 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587645833224 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504249573467 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116384164829 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560002970597 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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