Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is thought that the government should prohibit all dangerous sports. While somebody thinks that is not dispensable, the person has the freedom and they would do what they want. In my opinion, I believe the person should freedom to do any kind of sports according to their hobbies of them.
To begin with, have many reasons why the government should ban dangerous sports because they threaten personal risk. Simple sports with someone is dangerous. Moreover, risky sports are extremely dangerous. If players do not care, they could create accidents for themselves, in the circumstance, they could be death. Adventurous sports make some people seriously injured to the body. For example, that can cause mental illness, the most serious is plant life. After the play, someone can be hurt by psychology because they just have experienced an extremely scary journey. Physically challenged would make the life of people reduce day by day, and get a burden for their families.
On the other hand, I believe that people should be the freedom to do what they like when still can. Nowadays, dangerous sports have many careful protective clothes and have a thorough instructor for them when they practice sports. Each sport also has many safe provisions for joiners. For instance, when anyone plays jump off the plane who always have a professional coach jump with them. And especially any dangerous sports will not permit those under 18 ages to play. Some sports must checkup the health of players before they join sports. Thrilling games also players to relax and dare receive challenges.
In conclusion, the person should have the freedom to join in the sports, activities that they want. In addition, must have many safe types of equipment and associated specialists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12068965517 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53355366503 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562068965517 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.834401543 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.25 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322984962082 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981247658278 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713233965392 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205506750131 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606221134373 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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