Some people believe that a country will benefit greatly if its students study abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people credit that a country will genially if it’s students learning foreign. From my perspective, I agree this argument. To prove this, some benefits phenomenon will be made.
Admittedly, there are some argument in favor of country will greatly if it’s students study abroad. First, study abroad one of the most helpful for students. By learning abroad, students have chance study in abroad, students have chance study in abroad country and approach the culture of a new land. When students study abroad can also have country economic is highest. This financial support, presumably, tends not only to increase economy of the country but also help students strive higher in learning to be able to go to other countries to explore, which eventually promotes a smart society. Second, students study abroad would probably result in a greater supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that skilled and knowledgeable human capital is imperative to foster economic growth and technological development in any nations.
Besides, when students in abroad, students will not be restricted travel in the country students are studying in, students also have chance go to neighboring country in a better way. Example, if you study in France, you will choose to go through many other regions of Europe including London, Baralona and Rome. One other reason that the state should let students study abroad is experience chance many styles education. By applying in abroad education program, students have chance access to many facets of industry expertise that students wouldn’t have known in students home country.
In conclusion, studying abroad has many benefits for students and country. From my perspective, if country enough funding for this will be a promising step for the future benefit of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'benefits'' or 'benefit's'?
Suggestion: benefits'; benefit's
...gree this argument. To prove this, some benefits phenomenon will be made. Admittedly, t...
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Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and approach the culture of a new land. When students study abroad can also have cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28187919463 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6467555754 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51677852349 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0435747624 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382590330621 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152868733294 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899495451818 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245593439352 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464323701247 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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