An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. Why is this the case, and what solutions are possible?
In recent years, the development of industrial plants has more or less affected the environment negatively. This essay will discuss potential reasons and suggest viable solutions to solve this issue.
In my opinion, a dramatic increase in human population leading to a higher demand for consumer goods is the main cause of environmental destruction. In order to serve this rising demand, companies continually clear land, cut down trees, and build more factories to manufacture more goods. This whole construction does not only result in deforestation but also release tons of carbon dioxide emission into the air, leading to climate change and catastrophic natural disasters. Moreover, during industrial processes, factories dispose of toxic wastes and contaminate nearby community water sources, such as rivers, lakes, or streams. This destroys biodiversity and depletes the aquatic ecosystem as contaminated water cause illness and death to fish and other animals.
Although the above-mentioned problems could not be avoided during human development, governments could take steps to mitigate the negative consequences to the Earth. Regulations and rankings are needed to assess the level of emission of each factory, and governments can take sanctions on companies that affect the environment. This may help encourage businesses to apply advanced technologies to reduce their impact on the planet and use cleaner energy, such as solar, water or wind. For example, if automobiles in Europe countries want to operate on roads, they need to meet fully the requirements and regulations on emissions for vehicles.
In conclusion, in my view, it is possible to mitigate the negative impact of humans on the natural environment if governments and companies seriously follow the environment protection regulations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.663003663 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08510598626 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.25024582 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 128.833333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157500533395 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499310505396 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489818568173 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973752313506 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483975087026 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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