Many countries import large amounts of food from other parts of the world. Is this a positive or negative development?
As transportation is becoming more advanced and convenient, it is true that numerous nations are relying on a huge amount of foodstuff imported from other regions in the world. While the trend is getting more common these days, I doubt that it may do more harm than good.
On the one hand, thanks to importing, people can enjoy a broader variety of nutrition. There are certain kinds of crops can only be cultivated in tropical regions or under cold weather; those living in temperate zone can only experience tropical fruits through imported products and vice versa. For example, Japan has imported Vietnamese lychees at exorbitant costs: 650.000 Vietnam dong for just 12 lychees, while the Vietnamese easily purchase a 1-kilogram bunch at just 30.000 Vietnam dong.
On the other hand, trading in great amount of food can cause the country to be dependent on the supplier. A typical example is that several restaurants in Singapore now have ceased selling their famous chicken rice due to chicken shortage, of which resource mainly comes from China. Besides, transporting food along such far distance requires tremendous preserving effort, resulting in the products themselves will be frozen or infected with a significant amount of preservatives. At the end of the trip, the foods may not be fresh or as nutritious as they used to be, leading to food waste, food poisoning or even other ailments that can be attributed to chemicals.
In conclusion, although food imported from other nations in the world can bring beneficial experiences for people from other areas, I opine that this generates more drawbacks than advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13909774436 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74056024805 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.6704600379 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.7 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222671634889 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877126850011 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887255605814 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143015664805 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082093881202 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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