It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.
Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime?
When it comes to the digital age, the prevalence of TV programs is the main factor that has contributed to the rise of youth offending these days. However, besides that, there are still various factors that cause crime among young adults. My agreement and the elaboration thereof will be pointed out in the following essay.
It is a fact that children these days have more chances to access modern devices without the control of film contents. To be more specific, due to the investment in the film industry, there are numerous channels whose contents are different and provide teenagers with a wide range of choices to watch. Recent research showed that the age of teenagers is the best age for imitating and imaginativeness. Thus, they are the offenders at an early age. Secondly, because social media has become more and more popular among young adults, there is the phenomenon of following the trend that leads them to break the law with minor crimes like burglary, theft, etc.
On the other hand, not only the media but also many reasons for juvenile delinquency. First and foremost, kids from single-parented families are more able to commit unlawful acts due to the lack of love, affection, and guidance, particularly children who are adolescent milestones between 12 and 18. Moreover, it depends on the situation that the juveniles are in. For instance, those who are living in poverty intend to use illegal activities to make a living, support families, pay tuition fees, or attend school as well. Therefore, the rate of youth crime has increased significantly, and the government had better take it into account.
To sum up, what I have said before, offending among adults has raised major concerns and posed a serious threat to our society in recent days. I do believe that besides implementing the solutions for the media effects, both the governmental and parental individuals need to spend more time with the kids to curb the juvenile delinquencies and eliminate the issue from its roots.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... minor crimes like burglary, theft, etc. On the other hand, not only the media bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99402985075 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70196252199 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629850746269 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6041565193 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148714134474 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455843165783 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460849053303 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822104950053 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255468675721 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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