It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?
Some people believe that with advancement of information technology, there is a dramatic growth in adolescent crime due to violent content broadcasted by the media. Personally, I totally agree that the negative impacts of communications are mainly responsible for this issue and several solutions should be adopted by the government and family.
To begin with, the young people are easily influenced with murderous and unhealthy media products. Indeed, their immature minds urge them to imitate the actions of characters in books and movies in daily life. Therefore, the overexposure to uncontrollable action films and stories gradually forms the instillation of violent thoughts making them difficult to control and seeing brutal behavior as a demonstration of their power. For instance, according to recent survey conducted in mainland China, the majority of juvenile delinquents are believed to have been controlled by the appearance of superheroes in action movies.
To handle this problem, governments and families play a significant role in managing children’s exposure to violence in the media. Firstly, the government should enact stricter regulations on the release of media products. Severe penalties are fundamental be imposed on production houses against law. For example, media companies in India will be banned from operating if they intentionally discharge products with unhealthy content to adolescents. Furthermore, parents should control children’s choice towards the media and organize outdoor activities for them. This not only motivates them to give up bad habits, but also helps them develop physically and mentally.
In conclusion, the effects of visuals media are the main factor leading to the increase of juvenile crimes and parent’s supervision and national laws can curb this situation. It is predicted that effective cooperation between families and authorities will bring about desirable results in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75172413793 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0515663314 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651724137931 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0763351107 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224146320736 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663449918634 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698699850455 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133940822915 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532573167917 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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