There are more workers working from home and more students studying from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Technology has penetrated every aspect of our life and people are undergoing changes in their working and studying styles. As a result, there has been a progressive increase in the number of remote workers and learners in many parts of the world. While I acknowledge the benefits of this trend, they are outweighed by its problems.
Admittedly, there is some truth in the view that teleworking and distance learning can be convenient and flexible. Workers and students don't need to allocate a great amount of money on commuting time. As a result, they can spend quality time with their family or participate in some recreational activities after a rigorous day. Besides that, telecommuting and internet-based learning allow both workers and students to arrange their time to meet deadlines without relying on the pace of other colleagues and peers. For example, outstanding students can determine which exercise suits their academic performance instead of following the general curriculum for all students and vice versa.
However, I would argue that these benefits are outstripped by the drawbacks. Both working and studying from home may result in a lack of socializing, which may hinder one's establishment of strong connections. Consequently, workers and students will be devoid of the buoyancy of communicating with other people. They are also easily distracted by external factors such as the notification from online shopping applications and the irresistible temptations of social media. Due to the distraction while working or studying, this style may reduce their productivity, thus decreasing their work and study performance in the long term.
In conclusion, although it is true that those who choose to work or study from home can benefit from the convenience and flexibility, these merits pale in comparison with potential dangers of this above inclination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ient and flexible. Workers and students dont need to allocate a great amount of mone...
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Line 4, column 386, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to allow'
Suggestion: to allow
...lecommuting and internet-based learning allow both workers and students to arrange th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43003412969 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04947993757 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6443371667 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178360849342 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547188721734 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455123451237 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11384248798 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468408090345 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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