Some people are of the opinion that children should be rewarded for good behavior. Others think they should be punished for bad behavior. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion and reasons
Due to less attention of the parents, children are now becoming stubborn and ill mannered. They should be rewarded for their well conduct according to few individuals, while other discord it and believe in scolding them if they do something wrong. This is a matter of debate which will be discussed in subsequent paragraphs before venturing my opinion.
Getting rewards from good deeds inculcate habit of behaving better with others among the juvenile. However, many parents do not promote such things among their children because they believe it encourage them toward bribes. Though such rewards may make them greedy for things, but it is beneficial for them to learn the things that doing good is always fruitful for them. For example, in eastern countries like India, parents and teachers teach younger generation to help each other and respect their values which creates a sense of responsibility towards the society.
Looking from other side if someone is doing wrong, that person should be punished by his guardian. Due to the bad behavior of the youngsters, they might face various difficulties because they do not have that maturity to decide what is right and what is wrong. If they are not punished, they would continue to repeat their mistakes as seen in recent scenario where parents avoid mistakes of their children and after that regret for not stopping them.
In conclusion, both the aspects have positive and negative impacts which cannot be ignored while venturing my opinion. I believe in balanced approach of scolding younger generation on their bad behavior whereas rewarding them for their good deeds. Therefore, a better lesson can be taught to them which helps them to grow as a perfect person
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...warded for their well conduct according to few individuals, while other discord it...
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Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encourages'?
Suggestion: encourages
... their children because they believe it encourage them toward bribes. Though such rewards...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09187279152 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48749196519 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6894933192 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317878146097 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108357362381 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555154637097 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20142885085 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383164011559 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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