If people could choose between a life without working or a life spending too much time working, people would choose a life without work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most people do not have the option of spending a life without working because they need to earn a living in order to survive. While some people enjoy their work, I agree that the majority would choose a life without working if they had the opportunity.
On the one hand, job satisfaction may affect people's choice to continue working, even if their job involves a heavy workload. A number of people who have ambitions in their career or are able to fulfill their passion through their job would feel satisfied while doing the tasks they enjoy. For example, organic farmers take pleasure in producing healthy, fresh food sustainably, living in harmony with nature. Their working hours are sometimes long, and work on the farm is often labour-intensive.
On the other hand, I believe that most people would cease working if they have a chance because work load nowadays has deprive people of time for countless private businesses. A typical white-collar worker usually spend at least 9 hours at work including lunch time, and after deducting 8 hours of sleeping, not to mention time for travelling, meals and unnamable errands, one has only 7 hours left for doing home chores or taking care of children. For a working single mother with a toddler, for instance, 7 hours is insufficient for her to keep the house organized and it would be impossible to spare time for learning something new or taking up a new hobby. Besides, the usual burden to make ends meet has always stresses working people. Therefore, if there is an opportunity to escape working, they would not hesitate to grab that chance.
In conclusion, although some types of work that offer people feelings of satisfaction are exceptions, I adhere to the notion that most people would prefer not to work to do something more fulfilling with their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'deprived'.
Suggestion: deprived
...a chance because work load nowadays has deprive people of time for countless private bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88025889968 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.632271824 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569579288026 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.238270382 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351286412662 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14274854222 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13007840872 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249231233535 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148372721128 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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