Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays.
What are the reasons for this?
What can be done to solve this problem?
In this day and age, an increasing number of students think that concentrating or paying attention to classes is too difficult. As far as I am concerned, there are some plausible explanations to this burning issue, while the essay is going to simultaneously discuss possible solutions to tackle this problem.
There are numerous reasons why students are suffering from distractions and attention issues. First and foremost, this can be attributed to the rise in noise pollution in both cities and rural areas. The overwhelming and intensely complex content of lessons taught can also be taken into serious consideration due to the fact that they are much more challenging and stressful compared with those in the past.
Hardly can the students stay focused when the amount of information is overloaded and too unappealing. Another contributory factor to this problem lies in the distractions coming from technological devices, such as mobile phones and personal computers, or family issues.
As complicated as it is, there exists several actions that can be taken to mitigate the conundrum mentioned. To begin with, there should be certain changes in school curriculum to reduce the amount of knowledge which is not so paramount for the students' future. Finland is one of the epitomes that proves that if this educational privacy is implemented, the productivity and concentration of students will be ameliorated for the fact that this country is globally ranked the third in terms of education. In addition, relocating school to another quiet place or imposing restrictions on constructing activities around campus is also a promising approach to the cited problem since this reduces the noise that distracts students. Last but not least, sandwiching small breaks between lessons is another sustainable solution for its support in easing the strain put on students and letting them prepare for the next ones.
In conclusion, the fact that students these days find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school can take root from a number of rational reasons, however, measures can be implemented to tackle this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, third, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29498525074 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95651165769 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59587020649 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1199473816 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.076923077 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382274947041 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123730369194 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713637079576 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208539074868 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698275153624 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.