Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.
Petting domestic animals at homes is a common practice by humans. It is considered harmful by a section of society to keep them with children while others refute it. Both of its aspects will be scrutinized in this essay before delivering a logical conclusion followed by my opinion.
Pets are best friends of humans who share a great bond with them. These innocent creatures are very gentle with children as they are aware of their boundaries. They not only maintain inappropriate distance from babies but also protect them from other wild animals. According to a recent survey conducted by United Nations Children’s Fund, it is revealed that children who grow with pets in their households are more protected as compared to others who do not have domestic animals in their house. Thus, pets play an important role in growth of a child.
Another side states the drawbacks of petting an animal which include dangerous diseases spread by these creatures among the children such as rabies and flu. If there are no preventive measures are taken, these contagious diseases can be harmful. Vaccination of pets is necessary in order to prevent little ones from these viruses. In Asia for instance, there is huge number of deaths caused by rabies because people do not get their pets vaccinated which cost them their life.
Petting an animal in my opinion is beneficial for children in many ways and it should be promoted. Concluding this, although pets can harm human babies unintentionally, this can be avoided by taking preventive steps by parents and guardians by providing medication to animals which safeguard them from transmitted viruses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08118081181 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68346627926 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612546125461 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1816294813 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204639399207 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701003457052 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463122996904 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123794868693 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206701323407 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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