The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?
Homosexual marriages are one of the controversial topics as it has adverse effects in the social currently, while some notions are shown that it is seen as an natural trend which humans have their own right to choose this type of marriage. In my point of view, gay marriages should be legal due to some reasons which will be discussed in the following essay.
To begin with, homosexual relationships are common these days which is shown clearly as the appearance of the LGBT+ society. However, there are some difficulties for people who have followed the tradition and religious culture of their countries, such as Indians and Hungarians, to accept this tendency. There are a plenty of cases which the family has prohibited their children to have a homosexual relationships by any chances, even harming and threatening their children. Moreover, some beliefs are shown that they would have a blood-related hier which can fulfil a family harmfully rather than a same-sex relationship which cannot conceive children.
On the other hand, in English speaking countries, namely USA and UK, the mentioned type of marriage are legalized. The British and Americans believe that it is a natural phenomenon of getting attracted to the same gender. For instance, many pieces of research have somehow proved that hormones are responsible for a person being homosexual. Additionally, every individuals have their freedom to choose their own happiness and live life on their terms. According to mostly countries’s law, the one who completes 18 years of age is allowed to make their own decision as to whom to marry, and they have their own right to determine their favour as being engaged in a homosexual marriage.
In conclusion, in my opinion, although gay marriages are considered as social disrespect in some areas, it depends upon two individuals and one has every right to choose their life partner. Hence, the discussed type of marriages should be legal not only in some countries’s law but also in every single person’s mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1234939759 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85560596223 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536144578313 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8203514637 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.846153846 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278317718634 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100213318653 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097552357471 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197491532482 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138736432122 0.056905535591 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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