Social and modern trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to make the living more colorful, especially online. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should live in what we are having and feel comfortable. To what extent do you agree with these statements?
With the innovation of the technology, social media is considered as one of the most effective tools to create new and unique trends, particularly towards the young generation. It is claimed that those tendencies are generated with the purpose of entertaining the online community. While some people do not prefer to follow them and enjoy the conditions which they have as well as feel satisfied with the inside. In my perspectives, I agree with the second notion and this essay will explain about my opinions somehow.
On the one hand, almost modern trends are derived from the famous individuals to create the up-to-date phenomenons for the social community. For instance, in current, Tiktok is one of the most popular applications that the celebrities use much more to upload videos in which they dance or sing. After that, they build a new wave for their fans who almost are the youngsters to catch on. Therefore, social media is one of the most potential worlds existing the trendings which are considered as satisfying for many a person and they can enjoy absolute in their surroundings.
On the flip side, many people realize that the modern trends are not necessary and meaningful for the practical living. In the view of fact that following those trendings is one considerable impact which makes people spend much time on investing to set up videos or searching websites. It is really a dramatic waste, while plenty of work need to be completed instead. Moreover, people should enhance the knowledge via the efficient books or films, not only surfing on the internet. Thus, it is not essential to pursue the new trends and instead of that focusing on the real factors which the living can be felt more comfortable. To my own supports, I totally consume that living in the reality with sastifaction will definitely bring to the owners of life more than a happy.
In brief, following the lastest trendings is an attractive experience, however, they only exist for a while and then disappear withou leaving any trace for the users. Thus, individuals in particularly the young generation ought to pay attention on more with the real factors which are important and valuable in life.
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- Social and modern trends are difficult to follow these days and it s widely believed that they primarily exist just to make the living more colorful especially online Some people believe that we shouldn t follow them and that we should live in what we are 78
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- With growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas Is it a positive or negative development 78
- In many countries children are becoming overweight and unhealthy Some people think that the government should have the responsibility To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Different people have different approaches to life Some prefer daily routines while others enjoy having new experiences Which category do you fall into and why Give reasons for your answer and use specific examples to support your answer 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in brief, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95380434783 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72446768834 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535326086957 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.981178992 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.9375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164984766028 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519811074033 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355580957472 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973396144421 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290436707088 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.