Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in
order for them to continue with their work.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Considering both low wages of artists and the significant social earnings of the various art fields together, the efforts of the governments for subsidizing them to keep them in touch with their profession seems to be reasonable.
Looking at the rapidly changing world in which most occupations would be replaced with
high-tech robots that can handle humankind repetitive jobs, the influential effects of art on raising a generation who are armed with creativity and innovation, which are the characteristics that wouldn’t be stimulated by most sophisticated technologies, is immeasurable.
Focusing on the objectives of art, it is created to enhance the social standards by attacking what is thought of convention in modern societies. Another feature that is worth mentioning is the ability of an artist to introduce a nation’s cultural values to foreigners by making compelling artworks and representing them in international exhibitions.
Although in most cases the government must help artists, the new developments of
technologies, for instance, NFTs which are certifications of ownership for artworks that can be sold online, could be also beneficial, if not better, for the bottom line as much as governments funds.
To conclude, we may interest the young by teaching them the most vital abilities to overcome job insecurity in the not-too-distant future by art. Moreover, we should leverage the artist's profound capabilities in redeveloping peoples’ notions. However, this doesn’t mean that the only way for making money out of art can be provided just by governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, for instance, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52868852459 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33688866875 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.9756398917 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.625 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194833881911 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767370835767 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570443936422 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877936707136 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532675040473 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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