Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is generally true that offering/providing liberty to creators motivates them significantly in order to share their own opinions as long as it is pristine to be delivered to the society. Having no limitations would bring about some irreparable effects in peoples’s real life. Additionally, in my mind, I partially agree that the authority has to diminish their activities to some extents.
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There is no doubt that a great and remarkable artistic concept or a creative work has an enormous impact on humans’s life in some (various cases). To explain it more, each piece of art could be a massage that should be delivered to the new generation. Besides, convey a historical msg with the help of pictures or movies can be more effortless/ trouble-free/ unchallenging compared to the texts. Artists need an atmosphere to indicate their society issues by the means of music or films. For instance, releasing a new song which is criticizing difficult situations is a method to present their concern.
On the other hand, setting no interruption or any limitations may have exposed society to some threatening circumstances. The arised pitfalls can overweight the benefit of poetic license allowance . Unfortunately , to be subjected to a wide range of countless outlooks that are provided to the juveniles in any place , may lead the youth to be under influence by confused thoughts that result in unpleasant repercussion. Furthermore, not all art works could assist in making satisfying sense. eventually,It will be ended/terminated in appealing to taking drugs as well as drinking alcohol. Therefore, the Groverments men are in charge of curtailing them since they may have been a kind of warning to society.
-impose a restriction/ reduce in extent/ reduce in quantity/diminish
To conclude, although providing freedom to artists is a privilege, they may not be suitable in all occasions. the effect that their great works creates have an influence on human mind either positive or negative.Thus, applying a framework to their skims is a must.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, kind of, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24085365854 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31288470023 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618902439024 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3385413386 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203116702795 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553927034188 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417547469813 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100753757602 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368478141687 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.