Task 1: ( Table )
The table gives the statistic about the cost of a cup of coffee in six cities from 2010 to 2014 in Australia.
Overall, the price of a cup of coffee in all six cities in Australia witnessed an upward trend from 2010 to 2014 and that of Melbourne rose the most sharply. Moreover, Sydney people paid the highest cost for a cup of coffee in 2010 and 2014.
Regarding 2010, it is subtantial that Sydney was recorded with the highest price for a cup of coffee, $2.9, roughly twice as much as the figure for Canberra, $1.5, the lowest. Furthermore, the amount of money paid for a cup of coffee in Melbourne ranked second, $2.4, $ 0.15 higher than that of Brisbane. Lastly, Perth and Adelaide ranked fourth and fifth, with the former at $ 2.1 and the later at $ 1.87.
With regard to 2014, Melbourne contributed the highest proportion in change, 20.8 percent, escalating to $ 2.9 in 2014. With the rise of 13.2 % of the price, Sydney’s price remained first in 2014, $ 3.17. In addition, the changes in price of a cup of coffee in Perth and Adelaide were about 7 percent. Interestingly, the number in Brisbane was stable at $ 2.25.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$0'.
Suggestion: $0
... coffee in Melbourne ranked second, .4, $ 0.15 higher than that of Brisbane. Lastly...
^^^
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...ed fourth and fifth, with the former at $ 2.1 and the later at $ 1.87. With regar...
^^^
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$1'.
Suggestion: $1
...th the former at $ 2.1 and the later at $ 1.87. With regard to 2014, Melbourne co...
^^^
Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
... in change, 20.8 percent, escalating to $ 2.9 in 2014. With the rise of 13.2 % of t...
^^^
Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$3'.
Suggestion: $3
... Sydney’s price remained first in 2014, $ 3.17. In addition, the changes in price o...
^^^
Line 4, column 355, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...y, the number in Brisbane was stable at $ 2.25.
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mber in Brisbane was stable at $ 2.25.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, second, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51518759513 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3204269774 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0233336593411 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0116640333944 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349921001832 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.029160083486 0.15604864568 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505067461507 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$0'.
Suggestion: $0
... coffee in Melbourne ranked second, .4, $ 0.15 higher than that of Brisbane. Lastly...
^^^
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...ed fourth and fifth, with the former at $ 2.1 and the later at $ 1.87. With regar...
^^^
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$1'.
Suggestion: $1
...th the former at $ 2.1 and the later at $ 1.87. With regard to 2014, Melbourne co...
^^^
Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
... in change, 20.8 percent, escalating to $ 2.9 in 2014. With the rise of 13.2 % of t...
^^^
Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$3'.
Suggestion: $3
... Sydney’s price remained first in 2014, $ 3.17. In addition, the changes in price o...
^^^
Line 4, column 355, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...y, the number in Brisbane was stable at $ 2.25.
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mber in Brisbane was stable at $ 2.25.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, second, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51518759513 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3204269774 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0233336593411 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0116640333944 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349921001832 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.029160083486 0.15604864568 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505067461507 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.