New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
When the issue of leisure, especially new technologies comes into issue, there exist conflicting opinions. Many people hold the notion that these technologies bring enormous benefits to children, while others believe that they have caused children to change their lifestyle negatively. This essay aims at discussing both sides before presenting my opinion.
On the one hand, new technologies are advantageous to children. Thanks to these new machines, children are able to satisfy themselves with various kinds of entertainment. To be more specific, in their free time, children have many choices for entertaining purposes such as listening to music, playing video games and watching television instead of doing only one leisure activity. Moreover, these latest technologies are helpful in teaching children life skills. In other words, when children are exposed to some healthy games, for example, cooking or motor-racing, they are able to learn these skills better. A study in Australia has proven that when kids are introduced to play these games, most of them have the ability to acquire more knowledge and excel at these skills. What can be inferred from this is that recent technologies are beneficial to children.
On the other hand, these above-mentioned pros are overshadowed by the following cons. Firstly, this leads to the alteration in behaviors of children towards their families and society. Specifically, if they are exposed frequently to computers or game boxes, they stand a high risk of isolating themselves from the crowd. As a result, this becomes a drawback for them in the future. Furthermore, new technologies have detrimental effects on children’s health. The massive exposure to electronic devices can lead to the development of a passive lifestyle in children. Consequently, they may become not only idle and insolent, but they can also suffer from some incurable diseases such as obesity and visual impairment. Take the USA as an illustration. Reportedly, the rate of obese children in this country has been recorded to tripled since the advent of new technologies. This directly suggests that children are easily prone to a great number of health problems if they spend too much time on robotics and computers.
In conclusion, although new technologies are advantageous to children, their weak points should not be ignored. From my perspective, the disadvantages of these technologies overshadow the advantages as they are the root cause of society isolation and some diseases in children. If these problems are solved by the governments, families and children themselves, new technologies are absolutely great inventions for not only children but human beings as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
...en the issue of leisure, especially new technologies comes into issue, there exist conflicti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42280285036 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03648800768 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55106888361 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1543092413 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2608695652 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3043478261 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52173913043 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327549248536 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960032426436 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864526918459 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210471302651 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046318030648 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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