Students today can access information online, so libraries are not necessary.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable to fact that digital library is most eminent source of education in last two decades. Tutees at present can acquire knowledge online, libraries are unnecessary. I agree with this statement to a large extent as tutees can their quality time and they will get updated information from online.
To begin with, there is no need to visit traditional libraries. As they get study material online, they can get it without travelling physical library. For instance, students use web browser to access information without commuting any place.In addition to this, it will dwindle the use of paper. According to recent research, two trees are used to produce 100 papers so trainees should use digital way to obtain data. Eventually, we can save plants using less paper.
Moving further, scholar's can save their time. They have no leisure time to visit physically in library and they will use digital sources to obtain information. Resultantly, they will get data within few seconds by doing a single click. Moreover, kids will acquire updated knowledge at home. While using electronic gadgets, they can get upgraded study material at their house. To exemplify, most tutees access information using internet websites where data upgrading in every few seconds. So, why not students today receive data online if it will decrease the use of paper?
However, i may not overlook other side too, physical libraries helps to scholar's to focus on their study. They visit to library because they have need quite place where they would study without any distraction. To epitome, most University learners claim that they can get concentration in university library. What is more, online access data is expensive than physical library. Learners can solely recieve details if they will pay rent to access internet.Consequently, it escalate financial burden on parents.
Recapitulate, undoubtedly, online access of data save their efforts as well as give upgraded information . Although libraries provide quite environment to students, yet they can save their quality time by assessing materials online.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...act that digital library is most eminent source of education in last two decades....
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...information without commuting any place.In addition to this, it will dwindle the u...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Consequently
...f they will pay rent to access internet.Consequently, it escalate financial burden on parent...
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Message: Did you mean 'escalates'?
Suggestion: escalates
...ent to access internet.Consequently, it escalate financial burden on parents. Recapit...
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Suggestion: .
...rts as well as give upgraded information . Although libraries provide quite enviro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34638554217 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80575634456 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557228915663 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4463036997 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.6818181818 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207491190246 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650001160465 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478576389809 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126813848839 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022547997358 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...act that digital library is most eminent source of education in last two decades....
^^
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...information without commuting any place.In addition to this, it will dwindle the u...
^^
Line 6, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... decrease the use of paper? However, i may not overlook other side too, physic...
^
Line 6, column 456, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Consequently
...f they will pay rent to access internet.Consequently, it escalate financial burden on parent...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 473, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'escalates'?
Suggestion: escalates
...ent to access internet.Consequently, it escalate financial burden on parents. Recapit...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rts as well as give upgraded information . Although libraries provide quite enviro...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34638554217 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80575634456 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557228915663 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4463036997 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.6818181818 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207491190246 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650001160465 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478576389809 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126813848839 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022547997358 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.